Thursday, May 7, 2020
writting
When mike and joe went rock climbing they saw the sky start forming a gigantic clould. Then they felt little drips of water it was raining! both of the boys knew that it will be harder to climb down! But then the rock were getting slipery and more slipery! Mike and joe tryed to find a place that isnt wet they always keep on almost falling. They were so frustrated and scared! After a while of climbing on slipery rocks the rain started to stop and the cloulds started to deform into bits. The boys felt that the rocks were starting to dry. Mike and joe climbed down safely they would always cheak the weather before they go rock climbing.
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Hi Daisy
ReplyDeleteYou have written a very interesting story. Gee it would be very slippery on wet rocks. But I'm glad they got down safely.
Yes it is a very good idea to check the weather before doing any outdoor recreational activities.
Hello Mrs Snook! I'm sorry if i haven't respond but my mum always tells us to get the school jacket when it wasn't raining!It would always take up some space in my school bag!
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